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You are the pen lid,
thoroughly chewed,
that will get replaced.
You are the doodles,
drawn all in pencil,
that will get erased.

You are the junkfood,
salted or sweet,
that will go to my thighs.
You are the poems,,
avidly typed
that are half-truths and lies.

You are the earrings,
in colours bright,
that dangle and tease.
You are the knee-highs,
not average socks
that continually please.

You are the books,
all in one box,
that wait to be read.
You are my mouth,
hungry with boredom,
that needs to be fed.

You are my alarm clock,
bright and glowing
that produces a stare.
You are the bobbles
in all different colours
that I place in my hair.

You are the rain
on my darkened window,
that trickles down.
You are you,
the one that I've lost
who is all around.
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This is by far not perfect, and written literally just now
but I got the chewed pen thing in my head whilst boredom struck and I wanted to write it down, and the rest just came out. (<---Ugh, too many conjuctions.)


Anyway, whatever. Boredom.
I think I need to explain some of the stuff?
Maybe?
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I do find it interesting. I was especially drawn to the image in the first stanza. Pen chewings and pencil scratchings are common enough to be related to by any mood.

Were you chewing on a pen during the bordom this struck in?
Thanks very much lol.
That's true enough.


Er well no actually I normally don't
chew pens O_o. I poke my mouth with them,
but I don't chew them lol. And I'd just picked
up a pen to jot down a note, but I hadn't
done anything else with it... I guess I just
realised that I would've, normally.

Thanks for the comment.
Niz xxx

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^_^;
Just make sure you still have the cap on when you're poking your mouth...
Kinda cool. Don't know how I feel about this one, really.
Lol :P. Thankies though :).
Niz xxx

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:P Lol I always poke either with the cap on, or
the other end! Hehehe :).
Thanks :P.
Niz xxx

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